Chapter 542: Author Note + A little Rant
Chapter 542: Author Note + A little Rant
Well, first of all: HOLY SHIT, I ACTUALLY FINISHED THIS!!!
I mean, don’t get me wrong, I planned to finish my fic from the start, but I’m pretty sure that most writers on this site intend to finish their story when they start. Considering how many stories rest in eternal Hiatus and how few have a proper ending, it’s relatively clear that that rarely happens.
Anyway, what will happen now?
First of all, I’ll take a month-long break. I have my holidays all planned and need some general relaxation time. I will probably post a few of the planned omake/side story chapters that will give a glimpse into what happens after the war. Additionally, I will use the time to get a general outline of what I will do with my next story:
Yuna in Bleach (name pending)
I already have a rough outline of how I want to do this, but I won’t spoil anything for now.
However, I plan to change things up a little with my new fic. First of all, I plan to actually have advanced chapters all the time, not like how it was with this fic where I only occasionally had a few of them. Additionally, writing a chapter every day is too stressful, so I’ll be changing to a one-per-week shedule of longer chapters. All in all, you will get about the same word count a week.
Next, a little message for all those lovely people out there that “threaten” to drop the story every time something happens that they don’t like: Go f*ck yourself.
Seriously, what is wrong with some people? The most prominent example in my story is the introduction of another reincarnator: Hisoka. People were 100k words in by that point. Imagen stopping reading a story you invested multiple hours into because a single character that wasn’t even mentioned up until this point and has a single trait you don’t like: being reincarnated. Laughable.
Anyway, let’s go to the next point, which is pretty much webnovel com exclusive: the trolls. Usually, I wouldn’t even mention them, since I know that attention is the only thing that gets them hard, but I doubt someone who wants to “troll” me would read all the way through my story, so here we go. Most of you probably didn’t even notice too much since comments using offensive words get auto-deleted to some degree, but I still can see their comments in my inbox, which is a great system… Anyway, having your inbox cluttered with garbage is rather annoying. I once even had a guy that would leave 2-3 negative comments per chapter up to like chapter 70 xD Imagine waking up in the morning with around 200 stupid comments in your inbox. Anyway, since I ignored all of their posts, they finally decided to give up. Sorry, no orgasm for you. Oh yeah, on a side note, getting someone angry is not trolling; it’s called being a dick.
Now, I will proceed to get myself canceled: I don’t understand why people look at relationship issues between young teens so critically… yeah, I just said that.
Anyway, since I can already hear the police sirens in the background, I might as well explain what I meant by that before they put me behind bars. Readers don’t even twitch their eyebrows when a seven-year-old is sent to a battlefield to slaughter other shinobi. I don’t remember exactly which fic it was, but there was basically a scene in it where a nine-year-old Kushina kissed the seven-year-old mc, and everyone was going full hurr-durr. Like, calm down, people; it’s not like they were h*lding h*ands.
Alright, time for some shoutouts. I will obviously miss like 90% of the people I wanted to give a shoutout to, but here we go anyway.
First of all, shoutouts to all of my patreons. Your donations helped me fuel my alco… *cough* made it possible for me to get a few things I wouldn’t have usually gotten. (Including the awesome book cover)
Anyway, here we go: Sleepymoonfox, CyberCrisis, Shadeymankey, Axel Gerard, Xhaustedhero, Killian Merphy, Glitchamble, Oscar Servin, Jonathan Lutz, Fish, Name not found, Hugo Herly, Libery, Eddy Yeung, Petropan, Chris Rose, Christian Jeffress, Timotheus, Denis-dono, Guilherme Castro, Corrupt Zain, Jeffrey Forsgren, RagniDrakula, Danyial Halim, Rene, Richard Darden, Lil Mickey D, Jonah Bönisch, talos, akir aiman, Jacob hipes, ThatGuy, Sheranor, Eakamdeep Brar, Dane Bailey, Chad Jarvis, James1Gal, Luke, Other, CF zagi, Vivienne Sullivan, Soulsmsher, Judd, Demi god, EvilSmirk, TheForgottenKing, Sarvyn, Samuel Pawluck, John O’Meara, Scarletmenace, Dan, Jose Cintron, Kevin Choi, WeirdWhirl, Dante Brady, Tyler H, Andrew Ha, Raken, Quellec, Kuroko, Legorate, Blackelements, Anton Kozlov, tyrell bentley, GAYDOLFGLITTER, Darien Fields, Shiro Kuro, Efgbog, Joshua smith, RockGeek, Kevin Kordich, Wolf, DeathClan1980, useless person, chandru selvakumar, Wesley Tebbens, Bjørn Håkon Thorvaldsen, Shira_Ori, Mythicalchase.
Then, shoutouts to all those people who pointed out errors for me to fix with a special mention of ARFitS, who pointed out by far the most:
Kiyuta, LazyFlesh, Pyrothium, Tunefullcobra, Arisu, CoolHunter, and many more. Sorry, I won’t comb through all my chapters to see who else posted corrections.
Additionally, I would like to mention that the webnovel system where paragraph comments get deleted even if only a single letter of the paragraph is changed can go f*ck itself as well.
Now, some shoutouts to all of you for leaving positive comments or just a simple “Thank you for the chapter” every chapter. The surprising amount of positivity I got while writing this was insane, and although I think I did a good job writing this story as funny as possible, some cheeky comments certainly made things even funnier. Here are some people I remembered the most vividly, hoping that no one felt left out because of my shitty memory: Einstein3, Shira_ori/yurei, HKS_512, IRrebel, Basically_God, Xuan-Wu, and many, many more. Sorry again if I missed a lot of vivid comment posters, but I have trouble remembering the name of someone who I have been closely working with for six months, so cut me some slack here.
And finally, shoutouts to this whole community which is surprisingly not as toxic as I expected it to be.
Anyway, thanks for reading and see you next time.
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href=”/profile/4301061992?appId=10″>DrunkenScholarHill</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>Very humorous take on the entire reborn into Naruto theme. Have to say it’s a really refreshing sense of humour. Not the typical gags that have been done to death but really surprising original jokes or inspiration taken from somewhere I don’t know haha. The dialogue is great and characters really pop and aren’t cookie cutter shaped exposition or cliches. There’s a satisfying lifestyle they’re living And it’s great. No knowledge of Naruto the series but a whole bunch of outside context powers gathered through years of Xianxia living. Lots of fun situations happened and will probably happen in the future. Great stories like this send me to the authors profile in hopes they’ve written a few more stories haha. Unfortunately this is the first for this profile but hopefully it won’t be the last 🙂
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This time, however, it’s impossible to give anything else! Every aspect of this story is superb. The quality of writing is very nearly flawless with only a minuscule chance of even typos appearing. The development of the story leans on the canon timeline of events. The tiny changes pile up though, and somewhere in the not-so-far future, canon will be wrecked. The characters… Oh god, the characters. Usually, this is where I lower the rating, since you’ll either have copied characters from canon or heavily ooc ones. Instead, you’ll get a single original character, who believably influences others. That’s extremely hard to pull off correctly, but it’s done fantastically well here. Updating Stability. We get lot’s of chapters to fuel our addiction, nuff said. World Background: Here, I do not only rate the Naruto universe, but also her home dimension. It’s been deliciously vague till now. We get snippets of information, that keep us interested but not so much that it feels like an info dump, which is a hard line to toe. Well done! Overall, we get a reinvented universe, a lovable main cast and all around a good feeling while reading this book. 5 stars are very much deserved and well earned! Keep up the good work!
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50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>Bored_MCLv4<svg></image></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M19 8a7.003 7.003 0 01-5.5 6.839V23h-3v-8.161A7 7 0 1119 8zm-7 2a2 2 0 100-4 2 2 0 000 4z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><a title=”Bored_MC” href=”/profile/4308176403?appId=10″>Bored_MC</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>honestly the name and synopsis of this fic is god-awful, and despite having it in my library for a while i could never bring myself to read it cuz i figured itd be terribly disappointing, like strongest talent in naruto, but then i actually read it and even just for the comedy factor alone its great, and despite the MC being a cultivator and so obviously from a CN world, she’s not ‘Chinese’ if you know what i mean, all in all, i read 300 chapters (400k+ words) in 3 days, once i started this i literally, and i cant express this enough, LITERALLY, did not stop reading unless to eat, sleep, or toilet breaks. i just couldnt put it down, the writing is as good as it can be, but the Dialog, OoOOooohh~~ its sooo goooood, honestly the characters feel SO real, its impossible to not be immersed, and despite how this may be difficult to believe by my review so far, but i have quite high standards, yet i love this fic, in spite of the fact that i dont really even like the plot, fics where the MC is a part of narutos generation arent really my cup off tea and yet i love this one because it is just so well written. and finally, Author-san, if youre reading this i want you to know that i spend all my time reading because i hate my life and like this i can escape into the lives of others, and i just want you to know that even if it was only for 3 days, thank you so, so much for letting me feel happy again for a bit :> TL:DR: dont let the title and synopsis deceive you, this story is amazing, at least read the first 2 chapters and you wont be able to put it down
<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”21577047605830800″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/21577047605830800″></a><small>8 months ago</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>32<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”21577047605830800″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/21577047605830800″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>6</a><a title=”Maerry” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”author” data-report-did=”2089607948″ href=”/profile/2089607948?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”Maerry”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>MaerryAuthor<a title=”Maerry” href=”/profile/2089607948?appId=10″>Maerry</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>Here I go shameless 5 Star review. Had this story in my head for quite some time now. I started making notes where I want this to go about two month ago and now im finally bringing it on the screen. This will have a good mix of action, comedy and a little bit of romance, while occasionaly pointing out the weirdness that is the Naruto world. Hope you enjoy it.
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<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23215308906429600″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/23215308906429600″></a><small>2 months ago</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>34<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23215308906429600″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/23215308906429600″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button></a><a title=”Orthanos” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”4300856858″ href=”/profile/4300856858?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”Orthanos”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>OrthanosLv5<svg></image></svg><a title=”Orthanos” href=”/profile/4300856858?appId=10″>Orthanos</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>I never thought that I would see a cultivator naruto fanfic that is worth reading. All things considered I would love to dump some PWR Stones to this fanfic. But 15k words which should of be met or maybe it needs ten reviews. Can you post multiple reviews for one book / fanfic?
<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”18956600305012900″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/18956600305012900″></a><small>1 year ago</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>30<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”18956600305012900″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/18956600305012900″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>5</a><a title=”Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”2613426287″ href=”/profile/2613426287?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>Gilgamesh_Of_UrukLv4<svg></image></svg><a title=”Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk” href=”/profile/2613426287?appId=10″>Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>Let All Mongrels Who Read This Know, That This Fanfiction Has This King’s Stamp Of Approval. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
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